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Wednesday, June 9, 2021
Milk Explosion
We put milk in an bowl and put some food die in and styred it with a cottin
Dear Liam, I like how you put in the picture so it is just the right size. Something you could work on though is adding more detail to your Stems and making sure your spelling is correct. Maybe you could also put your photo at the bottom instead of in the middle. From Isobel
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Dear Liam,
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in the picture so it is just the right size. Something you could work on though is adding more detail to your Stems and making sure your spelling is correct. Maybe you could also put your photo at the bottom instead of in the middle.
From Isobel